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Post  DoofFan on Fri Jun 15, 2012 5:44 pm

I'm planning of writing another fan-fiction with Doof, Vanessa, and my two OCs, Hailey and Cynthia. The story is going to be Doof, Vanessa, and Cynthia take Hailey to her first ballet recital.

I really want to keep Doof in character, this time. But, still be a loving father at the same time.

The only ideas I have are Cynthia chasing Doof in the apartment, because he doesn't want to wear a tie and Doof giving Hailey some fatherly advice, while riding on his shoulders to the school.

Any ideas or quotes would be a big help. I really want to write this. Smile
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Post  DoofFan on Sat Jun 16, 2012 12:08 am

I'm probably not going to get a lot of replies on here. I think everyone thinks Hailey and Cynthia are Mary-Sues. ^^;
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Post  yaoiXyaoi on Sat Jun 16, 2012 2:26 pm

Well the best thing I can think of for advice is watch PnF episodes very carefully, and jot down notes about Doof's actions. It'll help with keeping him in character.
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Post  DoofFan on Sat Jun 16, 2012 3:45 pm

I kind of know what Doof's personality is like. It's just so hard to think it out in Story Form. I feel like Snark is the best when channeling her Inner Doof. <3
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Post  DarkwingSnark on Sun Jun 17, 2012 3:40 am

I kind of know what Doof's personality is like. It's just so hard to think it out in Story Form. I feel like Snark is the best when channeling her Inner Doof. <3

You're much too kind. <3

My advice? Dialog wise, it helps if you exaggerate. Watch and notice how Doof really streeetches out his words. And waffle. Waffle like there is no tomorrow. Ramble till it hurts. Many times I sit her telling my inner Doof to shut up because typing everything he ends up saying is a pain. but it helps, trust me!

As for Doof and his family life...I say just don't make him forget he already has a daughter as well. I can't see Doof just forgetting about Vanessa, because he has a new daughter. (She might feel he is, but in reality it isn't so.)
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Post  DoofFan on Mon Jun 18, 2012 12:13 pm

Could you give me some examples? I don't think I would ever do that. To Doof, both Hailey and Vanessa are his two special girls. He doesn't have a favorite, he loves them both the same. <3
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Post  DarkwingSnark on Mon Jun 18, 2012 2:04 pm

Examples?

http://ramblingdoofenshmirtz.tumblr.com/post/25176716689/doof-and-major-mst-broken-boundaries-part-1
http://ramblingdoofenshmirtz.tumblr.com/post/25305578800/doof-and-major-mst-broken-boundaries-part-2

not only the story of mine that they are msting, but also just how they banter with each other.
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Post  DoofFan on Mon Jun 18, 2012 4:23 pm

I was thinking more examples for my story. But, since you don't know much about Hailey. That wouldn't work.

I have been reading that. Thanks. Very Happy
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Post  DarkwingSnark on Mon Jun 18, 2012 9:14 pm

You should link to the other story you were talking about, so people would know how to help out and give ideas. Smile
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Post  DoofFan on Mon Jun 18, 2012 9:18 pm

You mean one of my stories? Here's my latest one, http://sideshowbobfanatic.deviantart.com/#/d47zt61

Doof is a little bit OOC here. ^^; On another note, I want to hear your theory on what happened to Juatchadoon Doof at the end of the episode.
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Post  DarkwingSnark on Tue Jun 19, 2012 10:39 am

From what i read, my only problems with the characterization is the fact Vanessa seems to be having TOO much of an attitude. Plus, Doof says "princess" waaaaay too much.

Saying that, it was pretty cute on a whole. And I actually cracked up at Doof's line “I mean, I may not be a real Scientist, but I do go on the Internet a lot. ”
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Post  DoofFan on Tue Jun 19, 2012 12:31 pm

Thanks. Yeah, I know the story is kind of silly and Doof is way out of character. But, I really wanted to write a story where he's still Evil, but he has a Happy Life as well. Embarassed

About the "Princess part", I just wanted Doof to give Hailey a little pet name. Since he calls Vanessa, "Pumpkin."
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Post  DarkwingSnark on Tue Jun 19, 2012 5:11 pm

No no, I get that. I just think it feels a little awkward when you constantly say it. Just a personal feeling, though.
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Post  DoofFan on Tue Jun 19, 2012 6:57 pm

Yeah, I know. I'm not really good at writing fan-fictions. I used to write similar stories with Sideshow Bob. Embarassed

I'm very surprised no one is replying to the Times Talk link. You would think people would be all over that.
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